In some ways that's very true--but you've done a beautiful job of laying the groundwork for his later developments. And I love the kickass Delenn you have here, and the ways in which Lennier senses this but can't admit it to himself. Not fully. The understated allusion between her robes and the War Cruiser--brilliant.
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Date: 2008-01-28 10:33 pm (UTC)