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Technically, cheating, since the rules for the meme say comment-and-request. The reason is this particular fic. It came out mostly the way I wanted it to, and I’m happy enough with the writing; it’s also got a whole lot of ideas that I’d really wanted to get into a fic somehow. So I should be pleased with it. Except there’s something about it on some level that bothers me more than anything else I’ve written.

The fic is ‘Valen’s Children’, which is here and here (two parts).

( Cut for commentary and self-indulgence )