("not quite hate" can mean so many things, most of them awful, some of them more positive, and I can't tell which you're going for yet
Sheridan demanded a bigger role in this story on the grounds that he didn't want to play an extra in his own marriage, and that's difficult to argue with. I'm not quite sure how it'll play out in the rest of the story, though. He's definitely not going to act the way Delenn did in the return-that-wasn't, but this may well not be a bad thing.
The aging is good to have, and important.
Yay, I hoped that would work! It seemed out of character for him to outright argue with Delenn that she couldn't just dismiss everything and go back to the way things had been, so I needed some way to have him changed and Delenn ignoring it.
What did you think about the J/D stuff? (And there's a sentence I never thought I'd type.) It's important for the later stuff that their relationship is in a particular place here, and I'm a little concerned I haven't got the balance between Not Happy Families and how much they need each other quite right.
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Sheridan demanded a bigger role in this story on the grounds that he didn't want to play an extra in his own marriage, and that's difficult to argue with. I'm not quite sure how it'll play out in the rest of the story, though. He's definitely not going to act the way Delenn did in the return-that-wasn't, but this may well not be a bad thing.
The aging is good to have, and important.
Yay, I hoped that would work! It seemed out of character for him to outright argue with Delenn that she couldn't just dismiss everything and go back to the way things had been, so I needed some way to have him changed and Delenn ignoring it.
What did you think about the J/D stuff? (And there's a sentence I never thought I'd type.) It's important for the later stuff that their relationship is in a particular place here, and I'm a little concerned I haven't got the balance between Not Happy Families and how much they need each other quite right.