Oh, wow. What a beautiful story. You have Neroon's voice perfectly, and your Bramner as always feels so real, so alive, that I have a hard time believing that I didn't actually see him on screen. Neroon is exactly the right person to be exasperated at the Delenn/Lennier relationship, since he knows it can be done better.

But, I just love your take on the Neroon/Branmer dynamic. In two short scenes you show us an entire conplex relationship, and use it to illuminate important moments of Minbari society. I hope you write more of them, they work so well together here.