Glad you like it! I'm feeling a lot more confident in writing this now, and I think it shows.
(You didn't think Lennier's request was out of character for him, did you? It seemed to fit when I started writing, but then I got less sure about it - asking her to do something, even when it's for her sake, isn't something he does very often. (And even when he does, like in Comes the Inquisitor, it's more like asking her to reconsider rather than asking her to do anything active.) On the other hand, this situation is difficult for him in a different way to those others, so maybe.)
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(You didn't think Lennier's request was out of character for him, did you? It seemed to fit when I started writing, but then I got less sure about it - asking her to do something, even when it's for her sake, isn't something he does very often. (And even when he does, like in Comes the Inquisitor, it's more like asking her to reconsider rather than asking her to do anything active.) On the other hand, this situation is difficult for him in a different way to those others, so maybe.)