Thank you for the suggestions! I can see it working a lot more clearly now, and I really would like to write Lennier first-person fic, especially after that gorgeous story of Sabine's you gave me the link to.

I just can't get past some sort of willful misrepresentation on Delenn's part, though, either of the content or the context.

I think she had to be, and I suppose even if she consciously realised she was doing that, she could justify it by telling herself she was 'translating' Lennier's real meaning for Sheridan.